8 March 2010, 4:29 pm
The soaring Wedge-tailed Eagle flew majestically through the light blue open sky, looking down at the sunburnt ground it spotted easy prey with its big round focused eyes. Its aerodynamic body floated on the air like a boat in the water. It flew so smoothly and glided ever so gently over the enormou... Read More »
8 March 2010, 3:24 pm
Please tell me how i did, this is only the fifth poem i have ever written. Eyes so beautiful, and so bright Eyes that give the lantern light Eyes the demise the dark of night Thy eyes, are what I describe You float so gracefully above the ground You voice, a perfectly pitched sound Leaves me no ch... Read More »
8 March 2010, 3:29 am
Ok i know im no poet but i put my heart into this and i do love her so much and want to show it but i don't want her thinking that's a bit lame or that's weak etc. She won't say but i don't want her thinking is that it or being disappointed etc so i'll see what the people of this think. "Some peopl... Read More »
7 March 2010, 9:17 pm
We had to do this for English class so I am not by any means a talented writer... but rather a forced one. :) But I just wanted to know what improvement I could make. Thanks guys!! Love’s Eternal Flight (title of sonnet) Ere the dawn of time, ere the birth of man, Created He the love I share... Read More »
7 March 2010, 2:39 pm
Big City eyes, smashed flat - cold frame of glass, drifting thoughts colide with treasures known. Like acorns found in fertile fields fall grass contain within, a forest yet unsown. Weeds speed across a tangled, uncombed lawn; they linger near the drive, pretend appeal. Tempted by their wave creep... Read More »
7 March 2010, 10:20 am
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7 March 2010, 9:18 am
We are planning a 50th birthday vacation for a female. She is metaphysical/spiritual in nature. She does not drink, smoke nor gamble. She loves Art, Bluegrass Music, 70's music, Willie Nelson, and Traveling by Train. She has been to "major" vacation spots and we would like this to be something of r... Read More »
7 March 2010, 9:15 am
I need a title for this poem I wrote because I'm submitting it to my school's literary magazine. Any suggestions? It's loosely based on the novel 1984. contradictions everywhere, in the raindrops, in the air, passers-by please stop to stare, at this wonder, oh so rare. lies are truth and peace is... Read More »
5 March 2010, 7:58 am
I have off of work today so im just relaxing and later no im going out with my girl friend shopping and diner.Im glad you are an adventurous person and that you are willing to try sky diving. I am a girly girl but don't let that fool you i love playing sports.... Read More »
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